I’m sure it’s not fair to hold your sanctimonious tone against you. I think the medium probably encourages that.
So, I’m a lot more willing to overlook some B grades in classes like Ceramics and Theology than in your core academic classes (math, science, English, history).
I was skeptical of the recommendation from your “honors internship” teacher even before you admitted that the class reading including fucking John Grisham.
I’m not prejudiced against you because of your faith. But I am prejudiced because you appear to have let your faith sway you into writing an incomprehensible essay with errors of grammar.
A “Commended National Merit Scholar”? Not really the type of accomplishment I was hoping to read about.